I am SO glad you're back!

[Rokket]

The attorny's may have gotten the final word but they needed proof readers. It sounds like the proof readers really got the final word!

 

[Miss B]

Not if you saw the final documents filed in court. I retired over 12 years ago, so it doesn't bother me anymore, but was annoying all the years I did work there, and was producing litigation papers. The corporate documents weren't as much of a problem.

 

[Rokket]

Going to try to upload my story tomorrow even in here the Philippines. See you then.

 

[Terre]

Sounds good to me.
Good morning.

 

[Lorraine]

Good stuff, Rokket, see you then

 

[Miss B]

Looking forward to it Rokket.

 

[Rokket]

It's really cool. The guy who is reading it here on my ship is inadvertently giving me great ideas and ways to take the story just by the simple questions he is asking.

When you read it, if you could ask questions about what is happening in the story, I'll compare them to what he is asking and I'll know where to take the story after this chapter.

I'll need about 12-14 hours from now and I will be able to upload it here. It will be a .doc file, so hopefully you have Microsoft Word and will be able to open it. I know the guy who is reading it has a Mac and he has a program that can read it.

 

[Terre]

I've got OpenOffice4.

 

[Miss B]

I have Word, so no problem.

 

[Lorraine]

I've got a doc reader on my tablet

 

[quietrob]

When will be soon.

But where and how rokket rider? I should ask in advance, are you asking for critiques or editing?

 

[Rokket]

Rob, I am asking for both. Mostly critiques and plot holes, inconsistencies, that sort of thing.

I am going to upload it now and see what happens...

 

[Rokket]

Ok, testing.... testing. I have only uploaded pics before...

 

[Rokket]

There it is folks. Come and get it. And don't hold back on anything. I need to know if it stinks before I get too far into it. I am hoping reading the last paragraph will leave you hungry for more...

 

[quietrob]

I have my copy! Time for reading and retexturing...

 

[Miss B]

Just downloaded as well, and hope to attack it (just kidding) some time today.

 

[Terre]

Got it. Will look into it around other things that need doing.

 

[Rokket]

Nice! I just woke up. I have a niece that I supported through college who has a degree in nursing now. She has been working overseas in Bahrain for the last five years. She just came back to the Philippines yesterday. Instead of going home to see her parents she came to see me. Apparently, I am her all-time favorite uncle...

 

[Rokket]

And remember what I asked you for.

If I wanted my ego stroked I would have shown it to family. I am looking for honest critiques and brutal editing.

An occasional ego stroking wouldn't be admonished...

 

[Terre]

Nice! I just woke up. I have a niece that I supported through college who has a degree in nursing now. She has been working overseas in Bahrain for the last five years. She just came back to the Philippines yesterday. Instead of going home to see her parents she came to see me. Apparently, I am her all-time favorite uncle...

Good for you!