Agree for a still render, absolutely...I disliked it as I was doing it...but was following the general simple theme of the MGM logo. Perhaps would be best to abandon that, but would, in the end, be less recognizable. Also, with video, it's best to keep the colors limited, or else the file size on animations of this dimension will easily go over a meg, even on an optimized .gif ...so it comes down to an uncomfortable choice of compromise. That's why most of my animation work appears unfinished, or void of backgrounds...details and colors tip the scale toward being bandwidth heavy, and attempting to reduce it to 127, or especially 63 colors does some strange stuff to the appearance of multi-color projects...the end result being like pictures appeared on vintage computers back in the early '90's...for those who remember what that was like
I'm yet pondering how to go about doing the lettering on the sides...a still render would be fairly easy with text following a path, post work...but a 24 frame animation is more of a challenge.