I am SO glad you're back!

[Miss B]

I always wondered if that would really BE fun, as afterwards you have to clean up, and that can't be easy.

 

[Rokket]

I always wondered if that would really BE fun, as afterwards you have to clean up, and that can't be easy.

It's not really that bad. The paint rounds we are using look like real bullets, not the big round balls you find at a paint ball place where you pay to play. So we we picking up used brass and that's about it. The amount of paint in these simunitions is minimal, not really messy at all. But you get a chance to show someone just how much of a pain in the backside they have become....

 

[Rokket]

Oh, and the paint washes off really easy. It's almost the consistency of clay.

 

[Rae134]

how many bruises do you have

 

[Miss B]

Oh, and the paint washes off really easy. It's almost the consistency of clay.

Oh OK. I was thinking the big paint balls, and that I think would be a real mess to clean up.

how many bruises do you have

Good question.

 

[Rokket]

I only have two small ones. One on my right shoulder and one on my left shin. Most of these guys can't shoot very well...

 

[quietrob]

I can't speak for others but I was caught up in a render that started about 11 am and ended about 4:30 something this morning! As for who's pregnant, I'm rather sure it's not John!

 

[Rokket]

I can't speak for others but I was caught up in a render that started about 11 am and ended about 4:30 something this morning! As for who's pregnant, I'm rather sure it's not John!

Well, he is a superhero. That means he is capable of things a normal man can't do.

But no, it's not him.

 

[Miss B]

I only have two small ones. One on my right shoulder and one on my left shin. Most of these guys can't shoot very well...

 

[Rokket]

In case anyone wants to read it just for the story. I decided I wanted to finish it before I do any more editing.

 

[Rokket]

Please let me know when you download it!

 

[Terre]

Got it.

 

[Rokket]

Cool, thanks!

I made several changes from the suggestions everyone made, but I left a lot of it alone. I actually rewrote the last few pages last night. When I started reading it, some things didn't make sense, so I rewrote them. Enjoy it, and let me know what you thought. The next time I post the manuscript, it will be the finished draft ready to be torn apart.

I'll rewrite the first chapter, but the rest will be left alone. I'll post it one chapter at a time for editing.

 

[Rokket]

Oh, and just to be clear, the last few pages were rewritten after I posted this version.

 

[Rokket]

Where is everybody? It's kind of lonely in here....

 

[Terre]

My alarm went off about 5 minutes before you posted that.

 

[Lorraine]

This kiddy is getting ready for her holiday Off the boat today, bussing south tomorrow, flying to Oz Saturday. But I'll be able to download the zip tonight on my pal's wifi

 

[Rokket]

This kiddy is getting ready for her holiday Off the boat today, bussing south tomorrow, flying to Oz Saturday. But I'll be able to download the zip tonight on my pal's wifi

Nice!
But enjoy your holiday. You don't need to fuss over me trying to find time to read it! Holidays are about relaxing! Have a nice time, Lorraine!

 

[Rokket]

My alarm went off about 5 minutes before you posted that.

I keep forgetting about the time zone differences between all of us!

 

[Terre]

I'm in Mountain Daylight (USA) time.
It's 4pm here. Almost time to head back to work as Tuesday is my split shift day because of the work I need to do for the new sale that starts on Wednesday.